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The End by ~MikedxFtw:iconMikedxFtw:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


The End
      By: Michael C. DelloIacono

And here it
                   comes

Frightening as

                       Hell


There could have been so

                                        Much

               Done

Differently

                     This place we are
               At
Is not

                                        The
                           place
                  I
Know


And if this is the
                            End

                              I'm gunna go out with a bang
So take
                  My
                             Hand

And we can end
                               This
                         Like
              We
Planned

            Hand
         In
Hand

                   ..This isn't the end..
©2009 ~MikedxFtw
:iconmikedxftw:

Author's Comments

This poem is NOT, I repeat, NOT, about suicide. It's about losing a very close friend of mine. And no they didn't die. But when you lose a friend this way it's almost like tehy did, which is why I wrote it in the way that I did.

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~breaking-the-habitt Jan 23, 2009, 9:02:35 PM
it sounds good .. though a bit miserable in more than one way
(:

--
no lies. just love

get away, run away, fly away.

see you on the other side.
:iconmikedxftw:
~MikedxFtw Jan 23, 2009, 9:12:18 PM
Lol thanks and it's supposed to be that way
:iconbadassbandicoot:
~badassbandicoot Jan 24, 2009, 7:47:26 PM
i love this it's very emotional in its own way~
it is very depressing and im sorry about losing ur friend.

--
If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense. Nothing would be what it is because everything would be what it isn't. And contrary-wise; what it is it wouldn't be, and what it wouldn't be, it would. You see?
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